Riorganizzo la lista che avevo postato. Ancora solo 1 wincon (phage) e ho problemi di spazio.. mi dareste 1 mano?
//Lands 34
// Voltron Lands 3
1 [CHK] [card]Hall of the Bandit Lord[/card]
1 [SH] [card]Volrath's Stronghold[/card]
1 [CHK] [card]Shizo, Death's Storehouse[/card]
// Denial Land 5
1 [WWK] [card]Tectonic Edge[/card]
1 [MM] [card]Dust Bowl[/card]
1 [V09] [card]Strip Mine[/card]
1 [TE] [card]Wasteland[/card]
1 [DIS] [card]Ghost Quarter[/card]
// Utility Land 4
1 [PLC] [card]Urborg, Tomb of Yawgmoth[/card]
1 [AL] [card]Lake of the Dead[/card]
1 [CHK] [card]Boseiju, Who Shelters All[/card]
1 [DK] [card]Maze of Ith[/card]
//Basic Lands 22
22 [ZEN] [card]Swamp[/card] (3)
//Tutors 13
1 [VI] [card]Vampiric Tutor[/card]
1 [P3] [card]Imperial Seal[/card]
1 [DDC] [card]Demonic Tutor[/card]
1 [RAV] [card]Shred Memory[/card]
1 [ST] [card]Grim Tutor[/card]
1 [PT] [card]Cruel Tutor[/card]
1 [RAV] [card]Dimir Machinations[/card]
1 [RAV] [card]Dimir House Guard[/card]
1 [10E] [card]Diabolic Tutor[/card]
1 [M11] [card]Liliana Vess[/card]
1 [TSP] [card]Demonic Collusion[/card]
1 [RAV] [card]Brainspoil[/card]
1 [HOP] [card]Beseech the Queen[/card]
//Discard 11
1 [ROE] [card]Inquisition of Kozilek[/card]
1 [M11] [card]Duress[/card]
1 [LRW] [card]Thoughtseize[/card]
1 [4E] [card]Mind Twist[/card]
1 [IN] [card]Addle[/card]
1 [10E] [card]Distress[/card]
1 [AN] [card]Hymn to Tourach[/card]
1 [MOR] [card]Mind Shatter[/card]
1 [RAV] [card]Nightmare Void[/card]
1 [9E] [card]Persecute[/card]
1 [MM] [card]Unmask[/card]
//Removal 8 + 4
1 [HOP] [card]Innocent Blood[/card]
1 [TE] [card]Diabolic Edict[/card]
1 [TO] [card]Chainer's Edict[/card]
1 [FD] [card]Devour in Shadow[/card]
1 [DPA] [card]Eyeblight's Ending[/card]
1 [TSP] [card]Sudden Death[/card]
1 [CHK] [card]Rend Flesh[/card]
1 [DDD] [card]Snuff Out[/card]
1 [MBS] [card]Black Sun's Zenith[/card]
1 [PLC] [card]Damnation[/card]
1 [7E] [card]Dregs of Sorrow[/card]
1 [ROE] [card]All Is Dust[/card]
//Draw 10
1 [V09] [card]Sensei's Divining Top[/card]
1 [FD] [card]Night's Whisper[/card]
1 [ARC] [card]Sign in Blood[/card]
1 [9E] [card]Phyrexian Arena[/card]
1 [IA] [card]Necropotence[/card]
1 [LRW] [card]Hoarder's Greed[/card]
1 [LG] [card]Greed[/card]
1 [P3] [card]Ambition's Cost[/card]
1 [ST] [card]Ancient Craving[/card]
1 [DDC] [card]Promise of Power[/card]
//Mana Ramp 21
1 [WWK] [card]Everflowing Chalice[/card]
1 [U] [card]Sol Ring[/card]
1 [FD] [card]Wayfarer's Bauble[/card]
1 [R] [card]Mana Vault[/card]
1 [5E] [card]Dark Ritual[/card]
1 [TO] [card]Cabal Ritual[/card]
1 [CS] [card]Coldsteel Heart[/card]
1 [DDE] [card]Lightning Greaves[/card]
1 [TSP] [card]Prismatic Lens[/card]
1 [TE] [card]Jet Medallion[/card]
1 [10E] [card]Mind Stone[/card]
1 [6E] [card]Charcoal Diamond[/card]
1 [DDE] [card]Coalition Relic[/card]
1 [DDE] [card]Worn Powerstone[/card]
1 [ARE] [card]Darksteel Ingot[/card]
1 [MR] [card]Extraplanar Lens[/card]
1 [MM] [card]Skull of Ramos[/card]
1 [7E] [card]Sisay's Ring[/card]
1 [ARC] [card]Thran Dynamo[/card]
1 [9E] [card]Ur-Golem's Eye[/card]
1 [MR] [card]Gilded Lotus[/card]
//WinCons
1 [MR] [card]Platinum Angel[/card]
1 [NPH] [card]Torpor Orb[/card]
1 [M10] [card]Whispersilk Cloak[/card]
//Utility
1 [LRW] [card]Rings of Brighthearth[/card]
1 [AN] [card]Guardian Beast[/card]
1 [HOP] [card]Beacon of Unrest[/card]
1 [FD] [card]Crucible of Worlds[/card]
//Commander
1 [LE] [card]Phage the Untouchable[/card]
Siamo sopra di 9 carte e onestamente non so che tagliare, chiedo aiuto a qualcuno di + esperto. il mazzo si spiega da se, dico 2 parole sulle utility
Rings per sdoppiare i nostri transmute, Beast per proteggere l'orb e il nostro rapm, Beacon per recuperare orb al limite crucibolo per fare recursion con il nostro land denial...semplice e pulito, ma un po in sovrappeso

per il momento.
Edit: si possono inserire [card]Deserted Temple[/card] & [card]Cabal Coffers[/card] che con i rings e abbastanza paludi (6) fanno mana infinito e in + con il Sensei si può pescare tutto il mazzo